I usually don't like downloading games on my PC. I liked the art, you're very talented. It's creepy, but I felt the colors and lighting don't communicate that well. Something is off. I also watched too many animes and read all sorts of mangas, so don't take it hard on yourself when I say the story isn't original. I know my age is showing. Try Wick Editor for your future projects, my latest game "Wingin' It!" was made using it. All the best.