Thank you so much for your detailed feedback! My writing could… probably use a little editing. Left to my own devices I love (and overuse) my commas and run-on sentences.
I don’t really have a background in coding or writing! I started using twine as kind of a side thing while doing a visual art degree, and quickly fell in love with it. I’ve always loved complicated fiction, so I figured if I was going to make games it’d have be text games!
Some text-based games that have really inspired me: Digital: A Love Story (love the interface for this!), 1893: A World’s Fair Adventure (insanely detailed), The Fire Tower (gorgeous location descriptions) and Reagan Library (eerie, melancholy, sadly a bit unplayable on modern computers).
Will leave a review on Parasite shortly, but I really enjoyed it!