Maaan I really needed that Bonus scene after oughhh...This was very intense, good job. What happens is disgusting, and all parts of the experience worked together really nicely, text, audio and visuals. The shock that came after for Lana was written super convincingly and was genuinely upsetting. Her recollection of all the things that she did / could have done differently to change the outcome was amazing to read. The what-if thoughts are agonizing on their own but then paired with the fact that she also got the camera replay of what happened along with her own memories. I really loved this, it feels like you thought of every way you could make this more sad and horrible and took it :)