I really like the little moments you had in there to build tension! The dear running across the screen, the jumpscare with the snake, and even the missing sign at the beginning all made my imagination race. I wish the main mechanic was a little more engaging, though. By the third set of pages I felt like I wasn't seeing the game do anything new.
I also would've loved more interactivity in the final point of the game. If I could try running away, even if it was to no avail, I feel like I would've left a little bit more satisfied.
I still think this was a cool interactive experience. Hope you had a fun jam! :)