I love the art it's really pretty, and the game moves nicely, and it seems to have story which was nice. Now comes my nit-pick and it may be a skill issue...but i=the game moves too fast and I'm already a bad typist...
BUT, I can't blame you for my bad skills, the story is pretty good, like I said you have nice art, but I just wish you had like a slow mode or something. Nice game.