Holy crap! I was so shocked when I got to the end and it said this was a solo project. What an amazing amount of work to get done in a month. It looks gorgeous and the animations were pretty slick. I was a little bummed that you made this amazing world where the dead walk among the living and it's possible to transfer/sell memories but the dialogue focused more on dating and teen drama. We were so curious about the supernatural elements! Please tell us more!
No biggie, but there were a few tiny errors of missing images in the browser version. I caught "sona_eye_%s" and "Gray_nose". Heather had one when she was in bed but the text was so tiny, I couldn't make it out and her doofy boy toy had one when they were arguing in the hallway but I couldn't make out that one either.
Anyway, amazing work especially for a beginner. I would have never guessed you just started learning Ren'py if you didn't tell us. If you decide to expand it and need a hand, we'd love to help you out!