Holy shit, thank you so much for the super in-depth comment!! It makes me more happy than you know that you enjoyed my VN and got so much out of it, all of which is the kind of stuff I love my readers to parse haha. I'm glad Cabral's life and how she copes with it came across well and you enjoyed her antics, she is indeed very bad at deadlines but there's a lot more working against her than just that.
On the topic of all the magical realism stuff, some of it is explored a bit more in-depth in my other VN Blunt Soul Trauma, but I wrote this so it could be read on its own, as the magical aspects of magical realism are very rarely explained haha. Still, I'm glad you liked that too.
And that you cut right to the heart of Cabri so well! Again, thank you so much for this comment, it really means a lot. And I can't wait to read what you think about the other route!!!
(Ghost girls with knives are definitely in vogue, and for good reason,)