Bit of a mess, not gonna lie. Also some spoilers for those who haven't played yet.
Dialogue really needs to be slowed down a bit or only continued with manual input. Either way could work, but if you go for slow down, you should remove the space - next at the start of the game since that just takes focus from the dialogue away. Also some of the sentences are hard to read/understand, so maybe get a friend to beta read it for you, and if I remember right you told me to turn left while driving, though it was clearly right.
Also, I like to explore the map before really starting to play, this lead me to enter the house from the backdoor. Checking out the house I found the mother standing behind the door, after some dialogue I got the task to set cameras, but since I broke the sequence I was unable to set the camera in the sons room, thus hard locking myself.
Second playthrough I pressed q after being told to escape, which put me into the camera view cycle, which I could not leave, so I locked myself out of continuing the game again.
Fix those issues and I'd say you have pretty decent game.