Excellent stuff right here, maybe my favorite work of yours so far! The visuals are great; I love how simple the portraits and visuals are of the pilots, compared to the CGI look of the metalbodies. Very stylish and cool! The character writing is so good; the shifting perspectives throughout the story kept me really hooked, and it was interesting to see at times the same event from two different perspectives (like Blue and Purple in the shower). Purple's scenes were a real highlight; seeing their sheer sexual frustration was entertaining but also kind of horrifying because... that's a really awful situation to be in!
Also I need to just say that I love Blue so much omg... I want to give her a hug!! And show her my own blue bunny plush cause we totally match <3