This is a very nice game, the art is so pretty and the characters are great, very emotional, the choices you take trough the game and the dialogues are all so well done, the music is also great and it fits the scenes.
Now, on a technical it still has ways to go, very understandable since I read this is your first game, the mapping although very beautiful (specially the superb lighting) becomes kinda hard to navigate, specially around the doors.
My biggest issue was that the game doesn't show you the controls or any tutorial and I could not find a save menu (if there is one at all) and one time the game got stuck and had to play everything again, no big deal but is something to take into consideration.
With that said, I don't mean to discourage you from making games, on the contrary, this one is actually very beautiful and I hope you continue making more games in the future since you are obviously very talented individuals.
Keep up the good work!