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I do love when people tackle narrative in game jams, because it can be hard to inject a story into such a small segment of a game, so when you find yourself intrigued, it means it was done well. And I think you did so well! from the music and the scene of waking up in the middle of night, to walking through a dimly lit apartment, my curiosity was piqued to see it through!

Also kudos on the art and atmosphere. well implemented. I did however struggle to find the sticky notes and was lost on "what to do" at some points. if you were to continue working on it, I'd say think about the player experience and extra ways to draw attention to the things that need to be found, such as audio cues or other eye catching events.

For the sake of the time-limited jam, it was a really enjoyable tale!

thank you SO much for playing, it means the world!! im so happy that you liked everything, yippee! it makes me so happy to see the art well recieved (non pixel) because i went out on a limb and tried a new style for this!! 

we definitely want to add audio cues, some jump scares, and other things to draw your attention, my original dialogue was a lot more fleshed out but we ran out of time and had to condense it all!! thank you for your feedback!! 

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I honestly like how the dialogue was portrayed, it actually built a solid persona to the character (at least in my mind), like it was an actual thought someone would have to reading the sticky notes! so you condensed it well :D 

Also I adored the character portrait art. please do more non-pixel art!!

WAHHH thank you!!! ive had a friend tell me that she felt like an actual character and not just flat for similar reasons (including her planning to set boundaries despite her naiveity!), so im glad you also think so!!! 

pixel are is NOT my forte and we had Kells and another friend lending a hand to that, so i appreciate you liking the portrait art!! i wish i couldve done even more facial expressions with her in it hehe. val actually made a joke about a hades / persephone dating sim anddd im kinda thinking about doing it, so you might see more of her / and them!