Hi! Odd here, thank you for hanging out with me on steram ^^ I like the way you implemented the theme, where you can earn a second life through battling as a spirit :D Here were the talking points during stream ^^
1- Skip tutorial probably needed haha XD
2- Dialogue UI more central
3- I still have 0 idea how I bugged your game where I was XD
4 - Maybe an easier way to ease in and out of the perspective when you get into focus-mode. (that or freeze projectiles until you are fully in control) this way the down doesn't become up in the middle of battle :)
That's all I have though, congrats on your submission ! This was great and I hope to see more from you :))