Great start, the sound effects were great in it and I enjoyed reading that short blurb before jumping into the main story. I LOVE Cynthia's design a lot! The writing was really good at making me feel bad for Lou seeing him pout about the werewolf curse like he was :( The character writing is very good overall I like the way their relationships with each other were written.
I enjoyed talking with both of the characters a lot and thought it was an overall great experience. Good job! :) <3