Hii Dev
As a player whose interest are into both the RPGM and female protagonist aspect of your game I enjoyed your work. I saw references from other games that you've used ideas from other popular games which I didn't mind.
Despite having satisfaction for Lore, sexual content and setting of this game I spotted only two issues
1) Mary Rockbell's Biography
The female protagonist has little to no background in-game. Example: her age, former career, martial status, what she pursues, what's special about her, etc. In order for us as the player to adapt with our character we need to get to know her. With her striking beauty I kinda got the feeling that she was an actor or porn actress
2) Sexually Animation
The sex scenes were great but it lacked Animation work like thrusting, moaning in some scenes. Besides that it was good depending of if the player had threesomes or not