Well done on the Erik Satie inspiration, we can tell right away, very smooth and minimalist approach. Nice chord progression at around 2 min which I supsose is the B section. The thing to look for espcially if its a tonal piece more than an atonal piece is some of the hamronization and movement passage, there is alot of dissonance or accidental disonance, not sure its on purpose or not. Dissonances can be well utilized if place well in a context but over doing it would mean the whole piece can feel a bit disorienting, so I would take a look on how to gage those properly so next time it feels more satisfying. Good job :)