great job on the game! its not my type of game but the writing was good. only metric that was affected by my bias was enjoyment since that rating is so subjective.
-Lizabet
fair! thanks for giving it a fair go
The writing was definitely was I was banking on to prop up the entry, as this is my first full game, and second game project ever.
you should be proud! even finishing a game in a jam is hard. let alone making one as solid as yours. <3