Hi,
You found the right place to ask!
I can certainly check it out.
Fair note, I don’t really strongly scrutinize other’s works as part of a review, instead discussing what I liked and offering a potential design suggestion here and there. For me, if a work has achieved the intentions of the author, then it has achieved its desired effects.
Thanks! And I totally get your point. However reviews help bringing light to some aspects of the work that can be interesting to others perusing the review. https://carta-mundus.itch.io/wound/download/Awg3V3_4Yceh3wl_NO0zTaV6Ej5o7BBAlaqY... Feel free to ask me anything.
Sorry, made a mistake, here: https://carta-mundus.itch.io/wound/download/V5JV1NomHWOwE7OYWm5qbQJ4725LfgLiV9Ja...
Here’s my review:
The writing is great, and the design is on-point. My eyes also tended to drift to the right side image of the exterior. I was thinking it’d be neat to have a version of the right side (the detailed image) in pale colors (a color version), as well. It’s one of those devil is in the details type things, that doesn’t necessarily change the gameplay experience, but can add to presentation.
Anyways, that’s my whole review. The interior looks good.
If you want to check out one of my games, I recommend:
https://themetalcarrotdev.itch.io/the-tornado-trial
I feel it’s a game that challenges people to do stuff and be creative.
