OMG, I love, love, LOVE the character designs here! :D
It's really good, the style is amazing! ^^
I got stuck at the cross-word section, because I just suck at crosswords, (I GOT A FEW RIGHT), so I'd reccommend a hint section or something, but I'm actually reall surprised with how polished it is, with actually putting in the letters when you get one and stuff. :0
As for music, if you don't have time to get any, I'd reccomend just getting a looping wind/ambience effect, it's basically silence, but it gives the feel something's about to happen, COULD happen, ya just don't know when. ^^ Gives a really empty feeling!
A bit sad that this didn't get finished though, but hey, we all got lives! :D
Overall though, a nice game, hopefully ya get around to finishing it! =]
Oh, also, if you don't mind, do you think you could perhaps play my submission? I'd really appreciate it, I could really use feedback. ^^
Anyways, have a good day m8, good luck with judgin'! :D