I very much enjoyed this! I won't spoil the surprises, but wow there are some cool turns in there. I wrote a poem titled:
becoming animal
don't overmix
I'm high on spiced, fruity air;
WHICH IS 45% OF THE 1.6g DAILY VALUE
the thought of pie. The breeze is a child, shy
The coffee that's
someone moving in.
the smell of oil on
Whole Pools of it —
A valid receipt is required for all returns.
Can history show us nothing
BAKING SODA NEUTRALIZES ACID
I picture whole streams, new currents,
Low in calories
I'm a hawk.