Hey there! First of all, I love that cover art! That said, really enjoyed the atmospheric vibe of the game - amazing visuals, immersive sounds and nice background music just tied it all up together really well. So, congrats, especially since you mentioned on your page this is your first game!
The fishing mechanic got a good laugh out of me cause of how comically hard I struggled with it haha
Also, I thought I had run into a bug until I read some of the other comments here saying how that's actually the end of the story, so it might be worth considering mentioning that on the game page temporarily.
Anyway, once again, I had a fun time reading through your story, so, well done!