This is really nice! :D
The cg art is really nice, the creature's are really disturbing, the music is really nice too!
I didn't see in bugs in the bug-free version either, I'd probably update it to be the one on the page, it's not locked anymore. ^^
The voice acting is also really exquisite, I freaking loved the Manager's first line XD
And of course the MC's VA certainly put a WHOLE lot of passion into his role!
Also this is one of the only submissions that's actually pretty spooky, so congrats on that! :D
Overall, a real nice game, excellent work! >:]
If you don't mind, do you think you could play my submission? I'm trying to get feedback, its my first VN lol.
Anyways, good luck with judging, have a great day m8! :D