Thank you so much for your feedback!
The poem was actually written by the Voice Actress Soli Adna herself. It is so lovely and really captures the emotional high-point of the story.
For this game I had the challenge that people could send me voice acted fragments that I had to incorporate into the story. This is why the start is a little bumpy as I didn't really know how the story would develop. Though I think the other ending (when you report Safire) works a little better with the start.
The truck-kun joke might not land with everyone but I also didn't want the main character to be disappointed that they were not being hit by a truck without at least some comic relief. For a self-insert char that might be a bit much. I think it still captures the escapism of the MC but I totally appreciate the feedback. Directly starting at the manor would have been a good idea now that I think about it.
Thank you for playing it!