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Ri -- you continue to leave me stupid Impressed with the extent of your plot. The scene with MC's mom; the Oracle reveal; the Selene expansion!! Had me literally smiling and shaking my head in awe because I saw all your lil plot points making beautiful lines from earlier chaps to get here. Bet that was a great feeling for you~ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ

Always had the feeling this was going to be a heavy story (just let my bb MC be haaa-peeeeee ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜‚) -- but that BRANCH, Ri. The BRANCH. And oc, I have to commit to BOTH for science. I was too weak to do, what I call 'POWA route' on my Vez roll (doesn't MC have *Enough* to deal with?), but - - DARN YOU - - I done did it with Azaria. Still hurts; but kinda... feels fitting since they both have the huge secrets? Like, I feel you'll hurt me so good with those two... And Az may even surprise me.... (Look: rivalmance. It'd be hot.) But out of all the ROs, I feel they'll be the one most able to catch MC on their lies + having to hide/play the game with such a skilled opponent (while falling in looove) really excites me.

As for romanticals: Vez won this round for me. I am liking - nay, loving - the peeks of 'Domvereign' coming out. (and my MC poking it with the Biggest stick~) Can't wait to see what else they're starved for besides kisses~ ๐Ÿ˜ While I was weak on branch, I did have my MC be distrustful for (more)angst; wouldn't it be interesting if Ves (or posse) DID arrange poisoning MC. ๐Ÿ‘€

Az on the other hand was a surprise(not bad). Admittedly, didn't go down the way I thought it would: them being in this limbo on what they are. I think this was the least tease-y I've seen Az -- which made me think they were really affected by MC's poisoning. Mayhaps they're also scared? It's like even Az had to figure out what to be in the wake of how much MC means to them. Loved: 'playing with fire' line on their stats, btw -- oh, AZ - you have NO IDEA...~

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I loved reading all of this! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and putting a smile on my face ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’›

It was a great feeling indeed! I'm glad to see you're enjoying the routes and both branches. I hope both main paths will be fun for you. They have quite different flavors and a lot of different things happening that the other path won't see ๐Ÿ‘€ Even outside of the relationships, though of course there will be many relationship changes too. I can't wait to delve into how everyone will be dealing with the Oracle on the second angst path... 

You'll def see more tension on a "sus" path, though don't worry, it won't break your route, just add extra text and scenes, hehe

You're reading Az correctly! There are other reasons that are making them reluctant to dive into a serious relationship, but what happened to the Oracle def affected them more than they show and made them realize some things (or more like put them into the process of realizing some things, since they're still not done). And who knows, maybe you'll learn their secrets soon ๐Ÿคญ

Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you liked the chapter and wrote to me ๐Ÿซถ

Glad to see smiles were mutual then~ And don't think I forgot you were sick through writing 7; really hope you're patting yourself on the back. โค๏ธ

Something I forgot to mention about Among Us angst branch: THANK YOU for giving MCs so many options on WHY they chose it. I mean: I love pulling out my evil cackle as much as the next girl, but I so, so appreciated the very valid reasons MC would go for it. There was such vindication in: 'I've always been powerless -- why NOT know more than survive -- just once?' Yum~

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Thank you ๐Ÿฅน๐Ÿ’›

I'm glad you found a reason you liked! I wanted the Oracle to have several and for them to suit their character. Hopefully I covered the most interesting possibilities.