This is so fricking good for a first VN, omg! :0
The writing's surprisingly descriptive, the cgs of the towers looming in the distance are really stunning, and they're some cool character designs! :D
I got the Bad Ending 1, and I really tried to knock in the right order for the twins, but I forgot! X'D
The music is also very homely, a very nice, contianed sorta experience. ^^
I'll now go into what could be improved, for the sake of review, but do not be offended by this at all, this is just my opinion! :D
- Firstly, it seems really long, with I think having to play through several times, and 9 endings is A LOT for a game like this. Maybe just try to stick with 1 or 2, and fleshing them out as much as possible? idk :D
- Secondly, this isn't very important at all, but the UI felt really plain, if you threw in a different font and a dialogue background it'd work WONDERS, and still be fairly simple. :D
- Thirdly, this is more of a personal choice, but the time-limit thing seemed pretty off for this sort of game, everything leading up to it being relaxing and all, and I was just mashing all of the buttons half-way through, not even reading in fear of losing! So either make the interactions way shorter, or no time limit. ^^
Anyways though, that's all the constructive criticism I got, everything is really nice, ESPECIALLY for your first time! Good luck with judging, and good luck with your next game!
Lastly, if you don't mind, do you think you could perhaps play/rate my game? I'd really, really, appreciate it and it'd help me out TREMOUNDOUSLY :D
Have a good day fellas, nice work again!