I really like the art style for the drawings! I wish that aspect was presented in some way on the text screens or if the text were overlayed on top of some of the drawings. I think adding improving some smaller details could make it feel a lot more polished. Some more audio on the text screens such as background music/ambience or sound when the text is being revealed could help keep the player more immersed. I really like some of the descriptions in the narrative like "wet clothes feel like a second skin" or "describing yourself is like trying to look at your own back". Lastly, I'd put more emphasis on Morgan's goal of writing the essay; the initial mention is that Morgan was thinking about the essay and hadn't made much progress yet. If there was more of an emphasis on the importance of the essay that could help guide the player toward making the "right" decisions. Keep up the good work!