This was sososo kind and intimate and it's really really cool! I will definitively play this again! I thought the way you wrote without punctuation really had a noise vibe to it because it was constantly moving without a obvious rhythm. Staticly. It had a radio static vibe to me, also because a lot of sentences only made sense halfway through reading them like listening to a badly connected radio and not immediatly putting together the context. Radio to me is the image of sending out something without immediatly getting feedback, trying to communicate and not knowing if someone has the right frequency, that is such a pure desire for connection that really fit the story you told here. I don't know if that made sense to you, but it's all coming together so very beautifully.