Nice work, this story has a lot of good details, the story world is well fleshed out and easy to understand. I like the pacing of how information is related, and links are connected to specific places, people or events, and then some choices are presented. There are some typos, I would copy and paste the text into a text editor with spell check just to double check where there are typos. I would also switch the embed setting to launch in full screen because some of the content gets cut off. I like that you used images at the beginning and it would be good to use images consistently throughout the project, not necessarily on every page, but where it's appropriate for specific scenes. I'm looking forward to reading more!