Nice work, this is really structurally sound, there are clear good, bad and neutral endings, which is helpful for exploration, and different paths that lead to the endings. There is a really nice sense of tension that helps add significance to the choices being made by the user. I'm a little confused by the beginning, it starts using first person, "I wake up gasping" but then seems to switch to second person, "He turns his gaze toward you, eyes wide, trembling." And it also refers to Jimmy in third person. It seems like it would make sense for the whole thing to be in second person, "you" rather than starting with "I".