Helloo, visualizing the story is easy as you provide great ways of writing to help the player see whats happening as it's being read. I want to point out though, you have some pages that give options of what to choose but they don't seem to be ones that provide a " choose this or this" kind of options. Unless that was intentional of course. I would say when writing the story, conflict of choices is something that would make the player sink in deeper for sure.