¡Este VN es tan lindo~! All of the portrait art is tremendously endearing, not to mention the custom UI! The background art (and the visual effects applied thereto) is delightful as well, lending a certain distinct texture and atmosphere to the experience—especially during the tail end of the story, heheheh~
Though, honestly, I found myself wanting to see more of the story and the characters. In particular, I was itching to learn more about Ivy, since in the narrative as-is we see and learn very little of her personality, history, or motivations. What is it about her that endeared her to Clover, despite Clover's long history with Cia? What drove her to do what she did, and will genuine toxic yuri unfold with her after where the story leaves off?
I'm also still curious about Cia! I want to know more of her backstory, regarding both her history with Clover and the nasty details of her menhera episode~ How will she fare in the terrible situation she's found herself at the story's conclusion?
All of that is to say, you've got a cute gaggle of girls here, and I'd love to see you not merely put them into more Situations, but also peel back their layers to show us how they ended up in this mire of misfortune in the first place, heheheh~