Normally I just lurk on this stuff but this is PEAK !
The characters and writing and flow are all just AHDKJGUYFIOWHGFUYIHO
The naming section could be a bit clearer but i could care less about that considering that milo has MAN TITTIES
btw no idea how twine works but if you copy and paste the text into a doc and use ctrl+alt+x then it'll go over all the typos and stuff