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Very good jov dev. I love the renders and the motivation behind each facial expression, specially the smiles. Nonetheless, I would like to comment some aspect (just gave a 5 star review, btw)... So, SPOILERS AHEAD!!!:





1. I don't like the jerk behavior of the player. I wish that he got his saves erased again and was forced to really stay in character without... well, killing while having sex or masturbating in front of an unconscious girl. Really wished he was, well, perverted just to a normal point.


2. I love the non-sex jokes, such as mini-games, critic to stupid lore of other VN, and the way reload is portrayed. Btw, wouldn't the player be able to mass press the 'back' button to rewind even with 1 save? 


3. Love the breaking of the four wall.

4. Please add the tag "NSFW" and "Hentai" to make it easier to search on itch.io.

I would love if you were to take these facts into account. Again, really good job, even for a first VN. I cannot blame you for briefing some parts of the sex scenes, they take a long time to make. Good job so far Haptales! 





SPOILERS ABOVE!!!

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback!

  1. Oh boy, I can't promise it'll go the way you want regarding the player's behavior. But if you stick with the game, you might be a little surprised along the way.
  2. Ahah, good catch! I should've made the save restriction clearer. I'll fix that in the next update.
  3. ^^
  4. Damn, thanks for pointing that out. I really can't get the hang of that kind of thing.

For the sex scenes, I'm a bit limited by my current knowledge and skills. I hope to eventually make more complex ones (using Timeline, if you're familiar with Koikatsu!), but for now it's hard to find the time to learn while also working on the game.

Perfection can't be rushed. Your game is very good (and hilarious). I'll wait for the future updates eagerly.