Man, This is really cool, but it was a little too esoteric/detatched from something recognisable for me personally, so i don't think i clicked with the gameplay itself as much as i had hoped to.
I respect it a lot, there is an insane amount of polish and work here and a game that others seem to be really enjoying. I think my famous failures at planning ahead in games like these and my irrational need to power through text quite quickly almost definetly derailed me, so i can't blame you for it.
You've done a hell of a job. Props to you.