This game was so poetic and very whimsical! It felt very dream-like also; the overall structure of events and images reminded me of how the craziest things just make sense when you're dreaming.
One thing that wasn't so clear to me is the endpoint of the game. I returned to the first sentence in a loop, but it wasn't clear whether that was supposed to happen or if I should try another round. Although I don't think you should get rid of the cycle, it also echoes the dream-like aesthetic and makes me think of those dreams within a dream, within a dream, within a dream....
Great game and a very unique writing voice!