Surreal atmosphere, dark visuals and interesting plot - all I want from my visual novel games - superb work!
As someone, who appreciates visual novels and horror, in general I love seeing a murder mystery oriented games. Specifically, this one reminded me a lot of the movie "Cure (1997)", which has similar tone and unsolved murders. I loved the transitions, the free roam around the office, it sort of felt more real. Overall, I would love to play the full version, very soon.
Best of luck with this!