This AVN is honestly awesome. Not to compare or put it on a label, but imo your writing matches Caribdibs Eternum, which is insane. While there were some typos, the depth the story had (i just started season 2) was out of this world. Every line of dialogue kept me hooked, and I came to appreciate all the characters. From Clara to Noel, etc. Well, especially Noel. She's beautifully written, and her sis too, she adds a nice touch to the story. Thanks for taking the time and passion, i assume you feel, to develop this story. Definitely my top time favorite. Take twenty years if you need it to fulfill your ambitions with the story, I'm sure most of us will wait. It is so worth it. If I can give some feedback, it would be to get a proof reader to correct the typos, which are irrelevant to be honest but it would make the story appear more polished. And maybe add more sound effects on the H-scenes. Those would be my """"complaints"""", just to throw feedback on something. But seriously, man. I'm not trying to dick ride u, I'm just amazed by how you've written this story, how cute and pretty all the characters are, and how much potential this story has with all it's lore. I can hardly imagine how difficult it must be to craft an story this well established, my total respects bro. Wish you the best's of luck in your development, and hopefully in the future, another masterpiece from you. Much love to you <3