It could have been better; maybe the use of Images would have helped the overall flow of the message.Or better yet, design a pixelated computer style in HTML, running in real-time, something more interactive.
I agree. I didn't have enough time to do what I wanted to but still wanted to contribute something meaningful
Any contribution is meanful, even if its small.
As long as you keep on improving and iterating on the idea you might strike gold.