Lol guess I poked the bear too much with the magical girl.
It's rare to see people submit a visual novel in jams, so it's an interesting entry. The art is nice, but I was a bit confused as to why the side characters have animations, but the main characters like the player avatar and the magical girl doesn't.
The story is fine, but I don't see the characters have strong identities to them, they kinda all talk the same way. Would have loved to see more sound effects like text scrolling sounds and next dialogue sounds etc. The font you chose for the character name and title is also very difficult to read. It's a cool stylistic choice but it's not user-friendly.
I also think there's not much theme integration to the game. Maybe I missed something or I haven't got all the endings yet.
Overall a unique entry, but wish it has some more polish.