OMG, thank you so much for the thoughtful feedback! 💖
Yeah, I’m currently deep in script work and things are still super messy, so it really helps to hear what stands out. I totally get what you mean about the ghost part. It can definitely get annoying. I’m planning to make it skippable after a few tries, give more time to find the ghost, and maybe even add a little warning beforehand.
About the high school senior detail—I don't know if you point it out as a negative thing :,) or anything, but it fits the narrative I’m aiming for. The story’s really about growth and finding ways to navigate into adulthood, and I feel like giving the MC an older label (like 25+) wouldn’t reflect that stage of life. The whole thing is also a little inspired by my own experience as a runaway, so let's say MC is inspired by a little younger me. So hope it makes sense.
I’ll definitely make sure any mature content is handled carefully, with heavy emphasis on consent. Plus is not plot important and deffinitely not free sooo... just for ppl into that.
I’m shaping it slowly and polishing as I go. Thanks again for giving the demo a try—I really hope you’ll check out the full game when it’s ready!