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I want to say the game is good, and pretty lengthy for a demo in a good way!

So first positives: The adhd feature love it, the designs are nice, love Tis so much, and the ability to turn off the typing sound is great! Love the little pics of tis esp on the part two, and overall interesting story

Some cons: The first part is slow pace and there are moments of confusion as certain parts feel like 'you know this' as the reader we dont know and for a moment are guess (which im guessing things will be explained later on) Highschool senior is a choice... Especially with the possibility of nsfw things and one of the characters being in college first year (guessing), some of the dialogue is interesting but not gonna harp on that cuz it a demo and such, the ghost part was not fun (wish there was a warning for tht or can be skipped) and more annoying if anything

Again overall good demo, and again not gonna judge it badly on the minor cons for myself as things are subject to change

Purple Sugar177 days ago(+1)

OMG, thank you so much for the thoughtful feedback! 💖

Yeah, I’m currently deep in script work and things are still super messy, so it really helps to hear what stands out. I totally get what you mean about the ghost part. It can definitely get annoying. I’m planning to make it skippable after a few tries, give more time to find the ghost, and maybe even add a little warning beforehand.

About the high school senior detail—I don't know if you point it out as a negative thing :,) or anything, but it fits the narrative I’m aiming for. The story’s really about growth and finding ways to navigate into adulthood, and I feel like giving the MC an older label (like 25+) wouldn’t reflect that stage of life. The whole thing is also a little inspired by my own experience as a runaway, so let's say MC is inspired by a little younger me. So hope it makes sense.

I’ll definitely make sure any mature content is handled carefully, with heavy emphasis on consent. Plus is not plot important and deffinitely not free sooo... just for ppl into that.

I’m shaping it slowly and polishing as I go. Thanks again for giving the demo a try—I really hope you’ll check out the full game when it’s ready!

raedeross176 days ago

Def looking forward to the finished game! Also to explain the senior part, where im from and why it was con for me, most seniors are 17 to 18 or maybe 16. That's why it was con and little bit for concern but your explanation makes sense and like I said it the cons are like little things im eh about but not holding against you or anything cuz as you said your are still working on this.

Thank you for putting not only the time to reply but into this game, it looks really good! Also plllsss post the Tis phone wallpaper he so freakin' cute!

Purple Sugar175 days ago (1 edit) (+1)

Ahahaha. Thank you. I wanted to clarify that age thing because I understand why people would be a little eh about it. MC is strictly 18, don't worry. Where I'm from, senior high schoolers are 18/19 minimum. But it's like... Italy. We have from 3 to 5 years of high school. But I see that in different countries, it might be different T T. I need a disclaimer ahah. Just don't want ppl thinking the love interests are creeping on minors. That would be finny :,).

Here's the wallpaper: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xzgx5LTprV5F4Q-_7WUsIHEvzJYcG7RK/view?usp=shari..

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