this was pretty good! i think maybe there were some bugs with the batting cage game btw! just some food for thought... sticking harvey into the computer to earn money, but being able to spend a lot of that money on in computer harvey, doesn't make much sense... if the goal was to make money, why bother spending it on him/why program the cost of everything to be expensive? i still think this was a very interesting story- i just think there's room for harvey's wife to be more deeply motivated for other reasons to contrast people being motivated by money to hurt harvey in the first game/night game. thank you so much shroomychrist!!