Honestly the writing is good and its a fun read. Now this VN was obliviously suppose to be a AVN but at some point the Dev decided it wouldn't be that anymore. So this is where my problem begins, I don't know why they decided this but this throws a wrench in how i view it. I'll rate an AVN different than a VN as i won't hold a AVN to the same standards as a VN. I'm not saying that AVN's are not well written but we aren't necessarily playing them just for the story. So with that said as VN this is "ok" as now Im comparing it to other VN's and not AVN's.
Lycoris has many sexual themes with characters being originally written this way. So that leaves me asking if the dev is going to rewrite a large chunk of the story or not. I'll be honest and say that i believe the dev should write a NSFW version and a SFW one. Now this is going to be harsh but as the story is right now i just don't think this will be all that great as a VN. It just feels like a AVN that was too ashamed of itself to go all the way.