I really really like the Aesthetic of this game. It is very creative.
What I like
- I like the color scheme and tone you went with.
- I like how the figure always pops up and makes you do Simon says. It keeps the gameplay from getting stale.
- I love how everything looks hand drawn. It kind of gives me 2D Tim Burton vibes.
- The ambience is great.
Ways to improve
- I would rearrange some of the magnifying glass's spawn points. There were some way off screen and it was kind of tricky to click some of those without the camera shifting the wrong way.
- I would get rid of the "watch out" line. Every time the cat says that it always confused me because I would close my eyes by instinct. I had no idea you had to pull the wax on wax off Daniel-san with your mouse. If you decide to keep that I would make it more clear in the actual game release.
- I think the voices need to be touched up. They were kind of hard to understand and hear to be honest. If you like the style and tone at least add subtitles just in case some players are unable the hear that well.
Overall, I think this is a good foundation to build something bigger. Great job.