Praise: An awesome cyberpunk immersive experience: the music, the UI, the text and visual and sound effects, the generated art all work really well together. The story is well done.
Criticism: I was really put off by the embedded videos and only continued when I figured out my adblocker could be adjusted to block them. Eliminating all present-day images and videos would greatly improve immersion. Any that are important to the plot could be replaced with less realistic / more synthetic cyberpunk-looking generated versions.
Overall: thank you for this engaging if disturbing vision of the future. I am glad I had the chance to see it and I plan to find it again when another chapter arrives. I am glad to see the carefully-crafted skip to new chapter option is there for my next visit.
(P.S. to any programmers like me who are tempted to write your own tool to do the daily job task: just keep playing!)