ffreaking hell, mindoffur......
i love your work so much, even though there are things i would have loved to be different in narration (no offense)
i love all the little things and hint you spray all throughout your story and how you strive to perfect it
honestly, i even love aiden's route despite or maybe because of it's imperfection, it's like a first dip of your toes in the story and lore (my first route actually) where you scramble all the hints for what will be going on. and i know you would make it better still and our splitboy will become as horny as he deserves
but, and spoilers here
goddamnit, alvy route end was so much.. I'm not trying to say you did wrong or anything, it's just.. i felt so loved during it, so happy, you made it perfect little love story.. and then deus ex machina it ended like that.. it's like I've been gutted all over the floor.....
im so sad for what alvy could get,the potential,never realized in the next instance (or parrallel unverse idk) of the story,for cody not remembering any of it (actually i won't be surprised he will remember all the potential routes down the line considering THEY saw it), the cruelty of it all
the fact that cody needed to go through therium and alvy to reach scribbles...
you really outdone yourself but at the same time, fuck you, with passion