WOW, i just read this in one sitting and i am so impressed. your writing is so captivating and this is just the prologue + first chapter??? you've blessed us, you amazing person. the only thing i'd want to comment on is the fact that there are some errors regarding pronouns, constantly switching between they/the pronouns i've selected, and in the first meeting with ace it actually says he or she or they while i picked out their pronouns to be she/her. other than that, i'll be waiting with bated breath for the next update and i can't wait to meet the RO's.
amazing, amazing work. hope to be back for more soon!!!
