Hello! I just wanted to point out an error in spelling (I hope that isn't annoying), I thought you'd rather know than to just continue on? Unless you already noticed. In Chapter 3 with Ethel and Havard:
"Ethel nodded. She seemed to consider this a perfectly normal reaction. All thighs considered, it could have gone a lot better."
I don't know if you fixed it already, but I just wanted to let you know. Have a good timezone!