Hey Dev your game looks good so I thought.... 'Why not give it try'...... And I found something that needs your attention..... Your intro at the first is way too long, Keep it short, just use necessary topic.... Everyone played this type of avn so they know the basics . And you did a great job of not adding any text box, I'm really greatful for it. But this black thingy keep popping up whenever there a dialogue, Like
As you can see there's a black spot and the shortcut bar.... Can you remove it completely or just add something to make it transparent. And another thing is that just use different font or use italic instead of colour change to determine the mc is whether thinking or talking, or you can use double quote like... "I'm thinking" or you can even use brackets too like... (I'm thinking) believe me it'll be really convenient.
This are the things I found while playing this... I'll keep you updated if I found something odd again.
Thank you for this and good luck.👍🏼