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HUGE POST AND HUGE SPOILER ALERT:










I use a translator, I hope it is understandable. 

So, Polar has said several times that Mert and Artyom are "the main love interests." Now, after everything that's happened, everything that's been revealed, including Artyom's reports, I really don't know how they can still be considered "love interests."

I don't want to rush to judgment on the author's writing skills, but a story, like the relationships between characters, must be believable. And I really can't—perhaps it's my limitation—imagine how anything could end well between Finn and the two liars, because in reality, it would be nearly impossible to fix things at this point, unless they accept a toxic relationship of some kind.

I'm not just referring to the possibility that Finn might forgive them, or understand their reasons (some extremely serious, involving the massacre of innocents and children), but even focusing solely on the romantic aspect, there are too many elements working against it: even though it was clear that Mert and Artyom were involved in the affair and that their infatuation with Finn was too sudden at first, I hoped there were at least some solid foundations, like a real attraction, even if only sexual. But Mert and Artyom feel NO attraction or feelings whatsoever towards Finn. In fact, they never show a shred of empathy towards him, and what we've discovered in recent updates is that Finn is decidedly annoying to them. Plus, they love each other, which further closes the possibility for Finn. So I'm not wondering how Finn can still love them, because I can imagine several ways to do that, but I do wonder how Mert and Artyom could change their minds, how it's possible that they could suddenly fall in love with him, or that they could just as suddenly find him attractive. In fact, it's clear from their words and thoughts that they find nothing interesting in Finn. The things Mert said to Finn during the fight with the white dog, and Artyom's thoughts about Finn in his reports are brutally clear. To them, he's boring, mediocre, spoiled, superficial, attracted to money and wealth, childish, weak, incompetent, and not even attractive.

They're not even worried about him after the attack on the island, while Finn is in shock because he just saw two people die, was almost killed, and saved Berno. Only two sociopaths can't feel empathy in a situation like that. 

Maybe it's because I got out of a long, toxic relationship with a lying narcissist, but this whole thing really made me sad and somewhat "scared" (thanks to my ex for giving me PTSD), but right now I just want to go back to Berno and get away from those two as quickly as possible.

This isn't meant as a criticism, and perhaps my perception of some aspects is personal. I'll continue to follow the development for a while, because I'm curious to see how it goes, even excited at the idea of being positively surprised. But I also need to feel positive and reassuring emotions, so I hope I don't have to abandon the project because I can't stand the stress of such a cruel story 😂

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I can understand how you feel T_T

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Hey, this has spoilers too










Yeah, I had a lot of this thoughts my own too, I mean, I can see Finn being shallow enough to forgive them even without a proper apology, since he already did it after Mert treat him like shit the night before in the castle, this didn't sit well with me at all. But I'm having trouble imagining how Mert and Airton would soon became interested in Finn, since they really don't seem to like one thing about him and are clearly in love with each other. 

But that doesn't shy me away from the story, oh no! Quite the contrary! I want and need more, a lot more! I actually think that this was the first of many plot twists cause Polar is genius like that, in the beginning the story seamed a little superficial, insanely hot but superficial, but now it's like he is explaining every reason behind the characters too comforting and sudden behavior. I think this time what will surprise us will be Finn himself, and how he might be able to win not only our hearts but the ines others around him too, the ones who despise him, who used him. There's always time to repent, there's always time for new feelings to bloom, but I also really hope that Polar gives us the option to don't forgive them, or let them suffer a little at least. That being said... Hodger being a cannibal really disturbed me more then anything. 

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Right, if that happen and they interested and fall in love to finn at the end i hope we have option to turn them down. polar really tested my mental health and curiosity haha

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Hi, I'll try to answer in the hope of explaining myself. Spoilers follow, again! 







So, the problem isn't the themes covered, nor the story itself. In fact, I expected the truth to be revealed to us and Finn at some point. And that's fine. It was clear that Mert and Artyom had other goals and that their love for Finn was a means to achieve something else. Of course, I didn't expect it to go this far because, as I've already said, Mert and Artyom have no understanding of Finn as a person; they see him only as a tool, and that's inhuman, light years away not only from love, but even from any form of affection. And overall, I think that, against all odds, Mert and Artyom's behaviors and backgrounds have gone too far, so much so that it's impossible to go back while maintaining a credible and plausible narrative. The focus of my discussion isn't Finn. I understand his character, and it's also clear that he needs to grow, become the best version of himself (or the worst?). At the beginning of the story, he's a disheartened person, hiding in mediocrity, a victim of the traumatic events that have overwhelmed him. I can empathize with him (most of the time). So what's the problem? The point is what we know "outside the story." We can make a thousand assumptions and interpretations, but there's one thing we know, and one that Polar has repeatedly reiterated: Mert and Artyom are the main love interests (the secondary characters are secondary). So, if the author keeps repeating that we'll have a romantic relationship with them and to wait for the story to progress, given everything we know, I wonder: is this really possible? I can't imagine a solution that makes a HEALTHY love between them plausible. Of course, this could be a story about unhealthy relationships, that won't have a happy ending, or that aims to arouse feelings of unease, discomfort, and dark thoughts in readers. 

But I repeat that Polar's premise is different, and I quote him directly: "The story isn't going to be as bitter as you might think." And even if I can't see a bright twist, I want to believe Polar's words, because I really need something good at this point in my life, even if it's fiction. In general, I think not everyone is capable of generating a debate, and that's always a good thing. It means this story has struck a chord (more than once, and painfully). I'm just afraid it's gone too far to redeem those who should be our love interests. Right now, I much prefer Berno, even Holger, even if he's a cannibal, at least I know his interest in Finn is genuine, because he's hungry 😂

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I wanna hug you so bad

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Awww that's cute! Ty bro *-*

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Damn read this comment really eased my mind after reading build 7

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I’m really sorry you felt that way. Don’t worry, I promise the next update will have fun and romantic moments just like the previous ones. I hope you’ll keep following it ❤

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Hi Polar, and thanks for replying.

You shouldn't feel guilty; you're writing a good story that has struck a chord with many, or at least touched me. The fact that I'm so sensitive about the latest updates is, in a way, also connected to my recent past, it's not your fault 😉

For now, I'll continue to follow the next developments, that's for sure, even if the doubts I mentioned are still there. You have my attention.

If I decide to stop, it will probably be because I'm not that emotionally strong right now and I don't want to worsen my mood. But this also has nothing to do with you or Idunn (at least not directly).

Good luck, and may the inspiration always be with you!

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Please keep going. Your story is wonderfully written, especially in how you've woven all the logical threads together seamlessly. There's no need to apologize—some readers might just be feeling a temporary twinge of heartache. Just continue following your own vision; this is truly an outstanding story.

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Thank you for the compliment! I’ll continue with my vision; I just want to make sure people don’t give up too quickly and keep waiting ❤

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Bro u better 😭😭😭😭💔 My heart was aching because of those traitors.... Ugh I wanna go back to Berno  😔🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀


(This was som3 Fine read. Thanks for feeding us with good food 😋)

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😤                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yeah i feel bad for Finn though..2 liar pretending to be his boyfriend..Let me use the artifact to bring destruction😤 And shadow can whooped their ass...I hope Finn can find real friend and boyfriend,not the one that after for his artifact😤 Finn have feelings too..No wonder his sister always worried for his well-being...