The presentation was really good! The blur effect got a little too strong during the battle section, though. Other than that, I think maybe you could've included a dialogue log. I accidentally skipped over a few parts of the text and had no way of reading it. One last thing, and this is just a personal preference for me, I wish the game didn't remove the ability to save your progress.
Other than that, it was really good! If you ever make the continuation, I'll definitely play it.